Travis
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Travis, great work, and I now see you have a lot of talent, not just with computers !
If you don't mind a little constructive criticism, I would make a few minor changes.
1. #7 out to much facially compared to #10
2. #7 incisal edge is shorter than #10. To make the patient look younger, shorten #10 to match #7...... Make slightly different to look more natural, but more so the same length.
3. #6 you can see the entire distal facial, roll back slightly. This makes the
cuspid look to wide.
4. From the angle I'm seeing, #11 needs to be built out more facially...
5. Close dark triangles for sure.......
6. Make the distal facial on#8 match # 9 which look better....Number 9 is more concave on the distal facial-line angle.
On cuspids, always roll the distal facial back. Cuspids are always to the hardest tooth to make natural looking in the mouth.
7. Add a little staining to the cuspids to make slightly darker, more chroma, and a touch at the neck on the laterals. That will make it disappear in the mouth instead of looking like a new porcelain bridge that's one shade.
Unless the patient is really young, add a T tiny touch of colored stain on the incisal edge.....
Really nice work Travis, this is the first case I've seen of yours ! I like your general contours, line angles, incisal contours, and open incisal embrasures. With a few adjustments and add-ons, this case will look so much better.
Travis, now that I see your really a good technician, I hope to see more great work from you .
Well done.
Charles
Thats a lot to take in... Had to read it a few times.
Lol, at some point I have to return the case. Looking at the pics does help to see things differently. Iam glad I could share this. Its nice getting feedback and help to making improvements. I ll have to do this next time before I return the case.