Help grade my work.

[jSon]

Although the patient loved the case. I felt like I could have done more. Never saw the patient or any models. Hit me hard with the constructive criticism ya. I want to do my job well so your words will carry a lot of weight in my next cases.

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[labman01]

1st tip, try to give us a picture of tissue model because it lets us/you see the black triangles (if there are any),and emergence profile better.

 

[jSon]

Dam! I did not even take one. I will remember that for sure. Thank you


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[CoolHandLuke]

i like it. nice work.

 

[Marcusthegladiator CDT]

If you were here and you drew on one of the teeth on the casts with a sharpie, I would thow you out the window. Just sayin...

 

[Affinity]

they look like crowns.

 

[RDA]

Nice work!

 

[charles007]

Very nice work.
Grade your work ? solid A
Constructive criticism ? a few tweaks
1. I like the contours, translucency, shape, and surface finish..
2. Narrow distal width on 8,9 a touch to add width to 7,10. This will allow a little more width to cuspids.
3.. #7 is slightly tilted distally.. Taking width off cenrtals will allow correction.
4. #11 is tucked in a little to much lingually, build out slightly facially.
These tweaks would make a slight difference to your doctor, but the patient would never notice the slight changes.

 

[jSon]

If you were here and you drew on one of the teeth on the casts with a sharpie, I would thow you out the window. Just sayin...

That's how this lab does it. Each die is marked and the base has patient names.


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[jSon]

they look like crowns.

I'll 2nd that. I can not seem to get away from it. Your suggestion? Slam me. If you have the time. It will be appreciated. I want to get better.


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[bullit]

I'll 2nd that. I can not seem to get away from it. Your suggestion? Slam me. If you have the time. It will be appreciated. I want to get better.


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needs gingival bulge.

 

[jSon]

Thank you. I understand everyone sees things differently and that is what I am after. Weather it may be small, large or to advance, I have my eyes wide open to read your comments. Going on 4 years in the anterior department and doing 2-3 cases a day like this makes me yearn for improvement. Hoping to be a pro. Lol.


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[RileyS]

I think they're pretty great. One thing I started doing is not leaving the Incisal edge of laterals completely straight.

 

[Affinity]

Nothing wrong with making a 'technical' crown.. it looks like maybe youre PTC trained? The foundation is definitely there.. they just need refined. My suggestion would be to take a medium rubber wheel, something with some bite, but still leaves a high shine, and cut a 'neck around the cerv 1/3, sharpen the line angles , and. break up the symmetry of the incisal edges w some wear facets where the teeth would naturally have them. Thin margins down.

Add.more chroma to your cer 1/3 and embrasures. Create some depth, even a bleach shade needs something to break up the monotone.. even if its a light pink or salmon.

I didnt read anyone elses suggestions so maybe i repeated something. But refine is the key word 5-10min with a rubber wheel fresh eyes and its a different case.. dont be afraid to be more aggressive.. but nice work...

if youre not getting pics in the mouth of these cases youll never improve. Youve got a great base to improve on.. check out Als cases and texture.

 

[Marcusthegladiator CDT]

That's how this lab does it. Each die is marked and the base has patient names.


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Well the base should have a label. But each die? Naw... Sooner or later you can stare at a pile of dies and just know where each one goes...

 

[Al.]

Nice base.
Work on your contours your contacts and contours around them. Your height of contours could be more defined and your M and D line angles a bit more defined.

 

[Affinity]

Ill also add, open your cuspid embrasure slightly. Bring D of laterals in, open embrasure.. makes a big difference.

 

[jSon]

Nothing wrong with making a 'technical' crown.. it looks like maybe youre PTC trained? The foundation is definitely there.. they just need refined. My suggestion would be to take a medium rubber wheel, something with some bite, but still leaves a high shine, and cut a 'neck around the cerv 1/3, sharpen the line angles , and. break up the symmetry of the incisal edges w some wear facets where the teeth would naturally have them. Thin margins down.

Add.more chroma to your cer 1/3 and embrasures. Create some depth, even a bleach shade needs something to break up the monotone.. even if its a light pink or salmon.

I didnt read anyone elses suggestions so maybe i repeated something. But refine is the key word 5-10min with a rubber wheel fresh eyes and its a different case.. dont be afraid to be more aggressive.. but nice work...

if youre not getting pics in the mouth of these cases youll never improve. Youve got a great base to improve on.. check out Als cases and texture.

Yes you are right it's very much PTC. Everyone's work is almost identical and I want to shine a bit. The boss is a PTC trainer and it's his bible. I will certainly "do my best" to get near Al's work. I will see what the big boss man will say when I go off the PTC. Thank you for the reply everyone.


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[hammerhead]

Wish I saw this type of work 90% of the time .Nice job.

 

[LA Ceramics]

No Worries mate,.."That dog'll hunt". Way ahead of most to be quite honest.

Study Al's pics if you want something to shoot for,...them choppers is OFF THE HOOK B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!!